James' wife, Shelley, chooses to spend her inheritance to alter her appearance.
This is a very short story that I wrote to explore an idea I'd had. It focuses mostly on the growth, with some very slight themes of gentle fem-dom.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 5.00
soskkssk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
bloodhand
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Sometimes all you really need from smut is character motivation and then action.
Russian Judge
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This looks like a good start. Are Plus Women in a position of power? Have they made sexuality acceptable and desired? How will the woman deal with her normal sized husband? Might he be able to become a Plus Woman himself? If she becomes pregnant, will she give birth to a Plus Child? I can see a multichapter story or even series.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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