The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Light Fantastic
A Parturient Surprise
When a loveless maieusophile gets set up on a blind date, he isn't expecting to meet the girl of his dreams (and deepest fantasies).
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story. If your only looking for BE it may be lacking.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Superb work!
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing story. Short, delicious, packed with everything you could ever want out of a story. Lew was an enjoyable lead, Rose was a delightful treat and all in all it was exceptionally wellwritten.

Admittedly however, there was very little in the way of onstage growth. It either happened in the past or in the time skip. A few choice descriptions didn't make it feel totally left out though. On a personal note, I've loved your stories I adored the Hoferatu parts years back for years and am very glad you're still writing! I'd love to see you write things on an even larger scale both in terms of size of the girls and the story! but will eagerly look forward to any stories you write from here on. 

TLDR  great short story, wonderful characters, exceptionally written, but a little light on actual expansion.
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Short but very sweet.  There wasn't much in the way of actual BE, but that doesn't make the story any less wonderful. d
Some Reader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's simply the best sex story that I read for few years! I't very rare for me to write a comments, but this story is something is out odinary. Well, as my tastes very close if not identical to Lew's, this sort of reaction can be expected.  
But really it's rare to read something of this quality and focused on it. Thank You for this work, and really hope that it's not be a last.
No one
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is incredible. The story on it's own is well structured structured and paced, let alone the amazing fetish writing. I absolutely love the twist, making Rose even sexier. Thank you so much for writing this.
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