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The Overflowing Bra

Svin
Game Theory
This is a story about three women, each of whom wants to be slightly bigger than the others.

Sometimes, when everyone tries to win, everyone loses.
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 Igor
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Everyone loses? More like everyone wins, including the chiropractors!
 Boobityboob
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
That was a really fun read, short and sweet. Maybe couldve had more BE or descriptions of it, but ultimately an enjoyable story. 
 Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Fun and straightforward! Might have been nice to have one more round, or for the changes to have taken place over a slightly longer timeframe to allow the characters to breathe a bit more.
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