The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Nairny
The Perfect Gift
A detailed story where a woman discovers a box of chocolates that make her expand whenever she eats one. It's what she's always wanted, except for one problem... she is stuck in the office, quickly outgrowing her clothes.

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Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I think what the other guy was trying to describe albeit in a very dickish way is that the small paragraphs and lack of indentation make this read more like a news article than an actual story, but this minor complaint is ultimately irrelevant in the face of this extremely detailed and wellwritten story. I really enjoyed it, and look forward to more work from you!
Bruh
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nice! Love your stuff
Guest
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Author has no idea how Paragraphs work. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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