June finds out the women in her family have a not-so-little secret about their breasts when their soul mates get aroused.
Stay tuned for parts 2 and 3
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.75
Saint Limey
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Stayed up all night reading this. Good job overall. Especially enjoyed June's inner voice commenting on the antics. Looking forward to the next installments.
Heryarnrat
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great job! One of the best I've read in years!
mtb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Fantastic story! Can't wait for more.
Sobtac
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The descriptivenesss is a little light but this is a really strong start and if it ended here its would be okay but look forward to part 2
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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