Kimberly is a pale short chemist and materials scientist who is tasked with discovering a new substance for heat insulation. Her company needs this thick gel material for a top secret engineering project. She has found a suitable candidate and to her surprise, the gel can make very realistic breast implants. But how long can she keep it secret from her aggressive and superficial boss Holly?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.67
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 2.67
- Technical: 3.00
OdysseusII
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Found this one to be a bit incomprehensible to read, 0 development of characters, and with a violent ending that wasn't really warned for.
anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The story could be a little longer. I liked many of the items but would have liked it more if there was more BE. Good first effort keep writing.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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