The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Wishes Do Come True 2
Ruby is enjoying her new body and all the pleasure it gives her. Knowing that Jake gave her the body and makes her feel so good, she wants to make him feel just as good.
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The beginning with the slow BE ticking away was great! I hope there is a part one somewhere. The height difference detail was good as well. You got to love those little ladies with too much to manage!
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Needs to have the first one to fully get what is happening at first. The he's, her's and she's get a bit repetitive so it becomes hard to follow who you are talking about unlett everything was happening to one character. the ending was a little too easy and i feel this could go on to more than 2 chapters. Not bad but could be better 3.55
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