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The Overflowing Bra

TheBiologist
A BE Quickie: Quadruple Dose
a short, easily digestible BE quickie. for those here to see tits get big, in as few words as possible.

A young man obtains a dose of concentrated breast growth formula for his girlfriend... or was it four doses?

Best to just give her all of it. 
Average Scores:

Leddy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Nice quickie! Really liked the super short format. Would be great to see more growth descriptions and personal reactions. 
So Hot Sex Bot
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Geez the least you could do is wrap it up in a little bow. I'll have 40 milliliters please.
rz
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
eh.
GeoffK
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
It's nice as far as it goes, but it really is shortprobably a little too much.  I'd probably have enjoyed it more if things had been stretched out a bit more. Fine premise and all, but it feels like it's over before it's even begun. 
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