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The Overflowing Bra

Life Game - Teachers and Students Edition
The sequel to Life Game - High School Edition. Years later, Rachel, still growing but now alone in high school, starts another game...
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Stories like this are fun but I like it when the person playing gets to pick what happens like trading a body part with some one or picked something to double is size other than that its a good storie
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I liked the first one more, too. The effects of the game were not that synergistic with each other this time, and while 'bigger is better' is a thing, there is not really much room to 'expand' the story anymore, at least for Rachel.
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I like the first story from this hopefully series much more, maybe the reason is that Rachel ends 2ooft tall, thats not working for me. 

But its omly me, so go on writing 
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