The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Wokod
Life Game - Highschool Edition
A slumber party, four girls, and a game about to change their lives.
Average Scores:

daelon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this story. I hope to see future versions of this game with some male players added. A little tg would make things even more fun.
Mathemagical
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great story. Loved all the characters and the ending. The game itself was extremely creative and lots of fun. Keep up the good work. 
Wildcard
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Brilliant read, A Game of Distortion blended with Jumanji.
The ending with the alternative game editions, more to come I hope.
xyzxyzxyz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good job, I especially like how the different effects interfere with each other and the reality changing aspect of the game.
Nikochan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome story ! Great job !
Is it inspired by attribute and trait stories by Morpheus on deviant art ?
I hope you ok do a sequel
BigFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great story, please continue it.  Didn't get to see everyone use their new gifts.
JohnDoe1974
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I like this story, maybe some boobs could be way bigger at the end, but very good story 
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