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The Overflowing Bra

greatpersonhooray
Mothers Secret's 1 and 2: Discovery and Confrontation
A young man with a lactation fetish discovers some tantalizing secrets about his mother's past. This leads to an intimate encounter.

Note: I decided to combine these two into one upload because chapter one was pretty short, and two was already finished.
Average Scores:

Toga
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
definitely a strong read! The thought that there would be 7 more chapters is very exciting! Looking forward to when things pick up more considering where it's started!
SP1KEGRW
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
VERY WELL LAID OUT STORYLINE FOR THIS WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE BE 
WriteBetter
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Kind of boring. Mother is way too into it initially, and doesn't feel motherly at all.
kathy23
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love all the stories you've made and this one is no exception. Hope the mother's breasts get a lot bigger and a lot milkier.
deuxanges
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great start. I'm not really into incest stories but the premise is well set up. I appreciate this is just the introduction so there isn't much BE so I am hoping for more in the subsequent episodes.
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