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The Overflowing Bra

greatpersonhooray
Growing Pains III - New Developments
Natalie plots a new course for her life as the changes continue.
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WriteBetter
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Getting repetitive. We need more description of their BE.

Also, saying She was becoming a slave to her breasts has as much subtlety as And then she got huge!
kathy23
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another great one!
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved most things about the story! But as with everyone else, descriptions of the actual expansion and growth itself were lacking. Repeatedly saying 2 sizes bigger or she grew 3 more cup sizes kinda made us lose track of where she was. Until we got this sudden shock of Wow, they're down to her bellybutton? TBH, kinda felt like we missed out on the best bit hearing her struggle with the different sizes.
Pudge
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Could have used better size description this time around. Hope to read more soon.
Panda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love the story. Love to see her struggle. Could use some more descriptions of the size and weight. Really looking forward to see where this goes!
Boz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great work! Looking forward to future installments.
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