The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Borbin
A Lesbian in Stepford
A women takes a job in a strange, conservative town.
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Lesbian Fan
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I am by no means a prude and have no morale issues with sexual stories. But this story isn't about sex, it's about a fucked up power fantasy of men forcing women to act in ways they want. It's homophobic, misogynist, unbelievably gross, and comes across as if it was written by an incel that thinks lesbians just need the right man to fix them. Honestly, it makes me want to take a shower. 
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I very much enjoyed your story. Though the BE description could have included a bit more details, it was overall a funny, sexy story.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well written and enjoyable.  The protagonist was likeable and believable. Also super hot!
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