The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Growing fertile
Lara is a PhD student. When she finds an old stone from a prehistoric fertility cult...
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great, short story!
Your spelling is not a problem at all, just 23 mistakes there.
I liked the description of Lauras expanding scenes. The one offstage with her friend thinking about those expanding bra sizes was especially nice!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Goos story, keep writing. 
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed your previous story and this one was no different. Despite English being your second language, I noticed way fewer spelling or grammar mistakes than I would expect from a native speaker.

My only criticism would be the use of the 'gts' tag in your previous story and the use of the 'wow' tag in this story. Since it was only implied in the ending that the heroine in the previous story would grow to planetary proportions or that Emily in this story would grow breasts big enough to feed a third world country. Since neither of these situations were described in detail, I felt cheated as a fan of giantess and ginormous breasts when I saw those tags, so I feel the inclusion of those tags was wholly unnecessary.

In any case, keep up the good work.
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