The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Nairny
A Smashing Bust
A story that focuses on in depth expansion description. A woman is working at an archaeological dig site when she finds a fertility statue. She keeps it for herself, which results in some welcome changes.
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Workerkeeper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice differences in describing the size changes. I like how was building. Keep it up. 
xyz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really great descriptions, Looking forward to more. One thing would be to include more file formats. For example, .txt works better on mobile.
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