A man is entranced by an impossibly sexy woman at a club and brings her to his apartment. He has no idea that his life is about to be changed forever.
Re-uploaded with fixed formatting and additional file types. Sorry about that.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 5.00
MissLany
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I absolutely loved this story. I'm sure a lot of folks would prefer something more fitting to their fetishes and tastes, since the BE and such is a bit light, but I feel that doesn't matter when the writing quality is as well done as this. I enjoy the narrative and your tone, and it really made the content feel much more erotic. I hope to see more from you!
brit
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great writing style, and good job on formatting it properly. I didn't expect this to be a TG story, but I'm complaining it was a great use of M2F transformation. I appreciate all of the attention the fit of shirts, shorts, etc. but I felt like you could have done more to describe their size weight. Breasts up to a grapefruit are fine, but after that, you need to describe the mechanical effects of being so large. i.e. the breasts spilling out everywhere, running into her body, etc. I did very much appreciate the first few paragraphs where the man could feel Ashley's large breasts resting against his side.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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