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The Overflowing Bra

10 Days in the Life of a Librarian, Part VI
With Persephone's breasts growing more dangerously overfilled by the minute, she and Elena desperately try to find help before it's too late, racing against time and their own increasingly inescapable desire for each other.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This very well might be one of the best series on this page! The last ? part also got a lot of growing. And the interesting conclusion. Maybe that part could have used some growing, too...? 
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is one of my favorite ongoing series on this site right now. I love stories where the girl tries to grow, but grows more than she plans. I also love her friend and her expansions. 

My only problem with this story is the lack of description of the growth. Slight spoilers ahead When she wakes up, I don't know how big she is until about halfway through this chapter when she stands up and tells us how far down they hang. I don't have any idea how big her friend's ass has expanded until she goes to sit down in the desk chair. Both these scenes are after after the sex scene, when I needed my imagination to be the most informed. Just a quick width measurement would have worked. 

Still looking forward to the next final? chapter, though.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Realy good story love to read it and always want more. THX
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