The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mark T
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Three Times A Lady
Getting a magic ring for Christmas has unexpected side effects.
Average Scores:

Mr. Mergers
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of my favorite TG/BE stories.

Will It Work
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

This story was... OK. It was interesting, a well thought mechanic, but lacking in a full story. The hanging ending leaves too much off, I think.

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