The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A Long, Blue Summer
Elsie turns down a summer job on a berry farm, but she soon finds she might be getting the job whether she wants it or not.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Such a wordsmith.  Kodos consistently delivers some of the best writing around.
jelly fish
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
not enough technical things to mention.   Love the story.  personally i would have liked her to be not so willing and and resist or be shocked at the  growth..
Over all though   I liked it a lot
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved this story! Not usually a fan of blueberry inflation, but I absolutely loved it! Would love another story happening to someone else or maybe a continuation.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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