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The Overflowing Bra

Alias_the_Archangel
jimmy.alger@gmail.com
Lucid [Multiple Formats]
Dreams bring out your innermost desires.  Lucid dreams take it one step further...

By request - Now in multiple file formats!  Enjoy!
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Aaannd it's gone.. x)
Overall= 1, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Omfg ! A transgender focused story... x(
The writing and narrating were so great that i was very hype for what was next... and then the complete turnoff Caytlin Jenner alert "lol im a guy turning into a girl".. Arghh.. 
Yeah, i know there is the "tg" tag on the story. But I didnt expect it to be on the only real character which is the male hero.
Shit, lol, im so frustrated now... >:'[
Very good story, especially for the great narrating, but i'm not gay enough to enjoy transgender.. :[
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