The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Monk Larsen
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Bottle, The
A bizarre science experiment compresses a girl into a bottle, then triggers some breast expansion.
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G1ZM0584
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
it was cool i like your story
Alex Streuth
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story, its very economic length compresseses (no pun intended) a wonderfully wicked tale into a short amount of page space. Fun to read, with a poetic flow and succinct elocution of ideas. The detail of the Butterfly patterned bra is devlishly delightful.

I would like to read more by this author.

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