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A traveling computer salesman meets a farmer's daughter, and she aims to impress him.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 4.00
Kam
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Overall pretty good, it took a while to get to the Process, and when it did, it only happened for a very short bit, and seemed rushed.
Good job with he back story however, i think if you reworked the ending, extending it and making the process a bit more glamorous, it would improve the story by leaps and bounds
on a side note, what was up with the E with the oomlat(sp?) over it?
it was all over the place replacing letters.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great story all-round. Well done.
Not Leviathan
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
i didnt li ke the story all that much
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