The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Leviathan
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SuperBra Adventure
Adapted from Leviathan's entries in the BE Adventure, this is about Jim and his adventures with the magical SuperBra. (original 3/1999, updated 9/2000).
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 frsur
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Awesome, thanks for writing this (those?). Great description, just wish it were longer. I miss the addventure... some of the threads jutting off this part of it are great.
 twas good
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
original story, delicious ending
 theman
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2 
sucks. Not a good read. KInd of stupid
 LovedIT
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
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