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The Overflowing Bra

Joe Average
Unknown
Somewhere in the 70's
A teenager in the 70's finds his artistic talents seem to alter reality. BE and the 70's: Keep On Truckin'!
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Mallonius
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I loved the story. It was well written. It seemed to end without an ending however. But still very good.

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