The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

B3
Unknown
Simon's New Invention
New invention makes a woman's breasts grow to the size of things they touch.
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Eddie
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very funny. Nice wry sense of humor. 
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

A humourous story that is pretty good all-round; though a little sparse on character details.

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