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The Overflowing Bra

Randomking
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Sex Game
Magical and menacing boardgame tranforms its players in weird ways. Warning: graphic and strange xforms!
Average Scores:

Shadow152
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
I know its a story primarily about BE, would've liked to see some writing about changes in sensation etc from rubberised cock 
BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Ok.
Pigago
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

Superbly illuminating data here, tahkns!

Tdean
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I loved it. I first came across it on the old BE archives years ago. Amazing back then, still great now.

Chaos-Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Just need to work a little on grammar. As well as letting the reader know in some way WHO is talking when

Soy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely awsome, I wish the author will make a sequal.

Cronkster
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Definite Fave.

A seequel would be nice. It would be cool if the author could pick the decisions to alter the story.

Anonym
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very Nice
Please make a sequel.

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A good story all-round.

Mr_Nulcear
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of my fave stories.

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