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A good remote control can turn your roommate into something a lot more interesting!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 2.67
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 4.67
Pheasant
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved the story, then again, I love remote control stories. Keep writing with these characters and that excellent remote!
Will It Work
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Fast and easy. This is a very short story. It would make a much more approachable short story should it be expanded, but as it is, There is a definite lack of...development.
Chaz
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Would like to see more storys of interaction between the transgendered & male. You seems to know what you are talking about.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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