The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Anonymous
TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Scene: The Night
Brief scene involving experimental hormones and two horny teenagers.
Average Scores:
 brit
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Tripe.  About 2 paragraphs long.
 Oppai
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
It's a whole lotta short. I get that its supposed to be short but that makes it hard to enjoy.
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