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The Overflowing Bra

csphill1
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Payback
Two girls fighting for the same guy; one gets jealous and puts a curse on the other, who then finds herself in trouble with the law.
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 Anonymus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Best BE-Story i´ve ever red. She dont want it, she dont know how at first, it´s against her will and it dont happens too fast. Just how i like it.
 puzzler
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
great story
 MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 

I just love revenge stories!
 Gaffenheimer
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Truly great, even better than the story of the same name.  Your writing talent is incredible.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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