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The Overflowing Bra

Derob Jacobs
deejake@gmail.com
All I Want For Christmas Is My Two Front
Santa grants a woman anything she wants for a Christmas gift.
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grenshaw
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story. Personally, I don't prefer it when breasts grow one at a time, but then again, how else could you do it using Santa's hat? Besides that, the descriptions were excellent and the story was clever.

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