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The Overflowing Bra

Fret Pearson
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An expedition to find the reverse-wish-granting gnomes goes awry.
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Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent, though I liked the growth sequences better in the first, since they were more realistic. Also, I'd hoped to see a continuation of the main character's spiral.

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