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The Overflowing Bra

Hunter S. Creek
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A short (1327 words) .docx story with a warp/morph inserted.  I claim no ownership of the original photo.

Jim is hired to watch his neighbor for the evening.
It soon becomes a bigger deal than he expected.
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Gugi gugi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It seriously makes my week every time I see you post a story. You're far and away my favorite author of the genre. Thank you for your continued service to the community.

Che
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

It's a great start to a very enticing story. Good tease for sure. How about a followup story?

G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

What a delightful tease! More they cry more!

NO21
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

So much potential for an excellent story, so little words and content.
Please expand your story!

Blush
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

I'd love to see more. It left me wanting to see the process and the conclusion. There aren't enough busty growing amazons in this world.

deus
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

A good start, too bad that it doesn't go on any longer.

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