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The Overflowing Bra

Merkava IV
Saint, Sinner, Succubus chapter V
Chapter V in the story of Natalie and her on-again, off-again beau Matt. In this installment, Natalie make a new friend, and may have finally patched things up with Matt. She also gets a side job. Comments are welcome, either here or on the reddit. Please enjoy.
Average Scores:

TYDAL
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love it.  Thank u!!!
Kajakman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of my favorite stories. I still come to this site every few days, mostly in hope to see a continuation of this story. I'd love to see more! Don't let the haters get you down.
kain123
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm not sure what the bad ratings are about and I don't want to know either. Good story so far.

Just one inconsistency: on chapter one or two she commands her neighbor to donate all his money and then suicide. It would be at least suspicious for him to do such a thing right before his accidental death. A visit from te police was inevitable. And now on chapter five it was confirmed to be unnecessary, as you say she has a lot of accumulated wealth.

AF
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This series is absolutely AMAZING! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!! Keep up the good work!

crap
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

your story is like crap that crapped and was then eaten and vomited by more crap.

meh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

More crap written by a piece of crap.

DuffMan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great read. Waiting for the next one.

2134
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent quality of BE. Can you include one that Matt "do it" with Natalie in her true form?

Maikle.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Amazing. More hot muscular sex. Amazing.

471
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent read

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