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The Overflowing Bra

ZS
Seeder Part 4
The next chapter, we take a recess from our futa friend. 

It's a bit truncated at the end, but I wanted to upload it regardless. I started a new job a few months ago and I've had no energy or time to continue writing unfortunately. 

So it'll be a long time before I get to work on more, so I should at least share what I've got. 

Hope you enjoy, any feedback is great. 
Average Scores:

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm really, really loving this! I know you're busy but please give us the next chapter asap! It's too good!

TheFwank
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

This is a damn sight better than I thought it would be. Definitely following this series! :D

Sassy Sally
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Short, but pretty fantastic. Congrats on the job but really hope you can continue this story line in the future.

The Light Fantastic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Damn, getting better and better! I normally can't stand WG stuff, but somehow this is really hot.

cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Super hot. I love the desperateness. Looking forward to where this is going!

Lily Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This was wonderful. Very sexy and well written. I loved your other previous stories as well. I hope your work doesn't keep you too long from writing another amazing chapter of this amazing series.

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