The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Dynamoob
The Ring: Part II
It's day two of women transforming into busty beauties and just when Mark thinks he is finally getting used to his new world, things take an unexpected turn.

NOTE: Includes a revised version of Part I as well.
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Ark
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Overall very very well written. I ask for more
Damnati0n
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Love it i hope to read more from you in the future

ktmgo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved it!! Love altered reality

Browser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Genuinely well written. Your skills as a writer have definitely improved.

Vez'Roth
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I've waited so long for the completion of this story and it was not a disappointment. I loved where it went to and still come back to it regularly.

Spartacus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Definitely a fan, and this I just as great as the first one. I do find one major flaw, as said before, where can I get a ring like this?!?!?!?

Hope you keep writing for the community.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Fantastic stuff here. My only complaint is I can't find a ring to do this to me in real life!

Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This long-awaited follow-up was worth the wait! Excellent reality-altering transformations, and the sex scenes aren't bad, either.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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