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Television actress tries a medical beautification program on the sly.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.00
BE! no preggo please
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
While I agree with the above commenter about the need for more BE, I think the Story was well executed and very erotic. I especially liked the slow build in size description, not just a blow up to room size. I'd rather read about a ridiculously busty but believable actress. Well done.I'm looking forward to reading much more.
FS
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Enjoyed it as far as it went. Would like to read the continuation, especially if it involves a bit larger BE (a must) and put more emphasis on the Non Consensual (nc) side to deserve that rating.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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