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The Overflowing Bra

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Average Scores:

deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

Pretty good. I would like to see you stick with one set of characters for a little while before switching to the next scene. Sometimes it is difficult to understand what is happening when events progress so fast.

Xenoriddley
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Great story as always. Really looking forward to seeing more from you. While I do like the BE and Bimboization, It would be nice to freshen it up by adding a couple other transformations. Variety is the spice of life as they say.

Bimbolover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Jesus, man, you're on fire. Three great stories in as many weeks is making me feel a lucky Bimbolover. This is all great stuff. Keep it up!

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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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