The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

BH
Stranger Reading
A stranger visits a library and teaches some people to respect books.
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Bb47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Sexy but shallow 
Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I liked this story, but I really wanted to like this story more than I did. I'm all about the men turning into hulks and women into sex pots, but the characters were a bit thin and had little internal struggle. Not sure how a writer does this. Maybe there were just too many characters. Or perhaps leave their intellect intact, but have them become overwhelmed by the desires of their bodies. Regardless, good stuff, keep it coming!!!

Maikle.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It was really good. We need more hot muscular, raw, big butt, breasts sex. Thank you.

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