A chapter, about 8 pages, focusing on Isabel and basically all about growth! Still mostly futa-oriented.
We're coming up on some serious BE in the next chapter.
I would appreciate any feedback. If there are any requests too I'd be interested to hear them.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.22
- Characters: 4.89
- Technical: 5.00
Deleter_5
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I hope you keep these up, they are great stories. Could use a bit more detail in the growth, maybe stretch it out longer. Good work.
chargerse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Que
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Ballbra, oh my~! I love it. You've gotta get those two together, post haste! I really like it, and this installment definitely gave me a more clear idea of her size.
Angry Crayfish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is the best thing I've read on this site since The Light Fantastic first posted his Hoferatu series years ago, and that's no small praise. Please, for the love of my boner, don't stop.
Egg
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good God I am loving every second of this story. I can only hope she continues to grow much larger.
Incredible story so far! I hope you keep it going.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is fantastic, please keep this going for a good long time!
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Sauce
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome story wouldn't hurt to stretch the details out a bit.
Franklin
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
For a first foray you are doing really well! Happy to have you contributing to the site and providing really high quality content. My only suggestion would be include the rest of the stories in the zip folder so a new reader can get into the story in sequence. Hoping for many more chapters to come.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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