The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

BH
Stranger Games
Synopsis: A bored stranger plays a game with a couple in a mall. First shared story. Feedback welcome.
Average Scores:

a
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

great, love mutual growth

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I really enjoyed the mutual growth going on in this story. I find too many authors leave out the male in these kinds of stories, which is a shame. My only regret is that it was too short -- liked to read the next chapter when they put these fantastic bodies to work.

Daichi Azure
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Overall this wasn't that bad, but the changes that were done could of been a bit more drawn out to give them more detail and how they reacted to the sudden changes

czar
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I like it. I always like a stranger playing fun games on people. Its a fun read and is well written

aitchbee
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 1

Why the weird spacing?

Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very good addition to the "unnamed man uses reality-altering powers to toy with people" genre. I hope we get to read about more games this stranger plays.

BimboLover
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

An excellent story. Great the way they were both sexualized. Given your skill and style, I'd love to see something a little longer.

SomeGuy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Hot, and fun

ZS
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Really enjoyed this, and I'm not even into bimbo. Thanks!

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