The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A Really Big Show
In a world where live implant filling shows can make a girl famous, Audrey is determined to make herself the biggest star there is, but even the most gifted performer forgets at her own risk that her fate ultimately lies in the hands of her audience.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Its a kind of new idea, that I thought was great! I enjoyed the story thoroughly! Usually I try to give some constructive criticism but I can't think of anything you could have done better! Good work - keep writing. No criticism but you must have heard of Kristi_lovett!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Of all your stories this is one of my favorites. I love reading implant filling be stories, they just seem a bit more 'realistic' in a sci-fi way imho. This story is well written, thank you for such an interesting read.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I absolutely loved this.
The way you moved between past and present was clever and make this story more interesting than many that run from beginning to end.
I have read this several times and will keep it in my "favorite" file.
Thank you

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