The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Eliot Cayne
Unknown
Jessica's Curse
Jessica betrays her roommate, and gets cursed with growing breasts unless she has sex with 1000 men.
Average Scores:
 Anubis
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A very well-balanced story. Absolutely one of my favourites of all time. I wish this was part of a series!
 Anonymous1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
excellent story,some errors here and there but worth a continuation for sure
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
An alright story which is well written, but it seems a little open-ended. Maybe a sequel?
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