The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Miss Lany
elenabunbuns@yahoo.com
The Gift of the Madame Djinn
Rachel and her greedy boyfriend find a genie that decides to put them both to the test. For those not interested in story, the expansion doesn't occur until the very end.
Average Scores:

8reaper1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
in my mind this is the perfect story... with the one exception, it ends way too soon. please, please write more. 

the thing I loved the most was that the characters are real in their reactions. I dint stop and think why the fuck did you do that even once while reading this.
Jason G
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

hope there's a sequel in the works! i like your style and how everything's speled right and doesn't look like it was run through google translate. ;) keep up the good work!

Squigy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Question - Is this for the guys or gals?

sizegoddess
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Loved the story and hope there is more to come.

unknown
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Greate stuff

Beachball boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really liked the story & hope there will be more. I hope the boyfriend mellows out some... Or even a sentencing to become a Djinn, lost forever???

anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A bit of a stilted start, but the style settled down after a while and found its groove. Not bad.

JG
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4

Even Mary Daly would find the portrayal of the boyfriend laughably ridiculous and infuriatingly misandric.

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Most folks forget, that expansion is only fun when both parties are involved, not forced.

layman
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It was a good read

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