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The Overflowing Bra

Coffee Pilot
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Fitting in at the Ren Faire Ch11
Allyn, Maria, and Keelin (nee Stefanie, nee Steven) escape our world into the other world from which most of those crazy Renaissance Festival folk come from in the first place! It's a strange, anachronism filled mix of medieval, renaissance, and even modern influences. There they take a well deserved rest before starting their journey to break Maria's curse. The girls meet some nice guards at the pub, and oh the fun that is had when they decide to indulge in a bit of food and drink. Maria decides to cut loose and live a little, as the curse that keeps fattening her up will soon be broken... but maybe she should think twice about that. Now they just have to get Maria to the alchemist before the curse makes her too big and busty to ride a horse! It will be a curious journey, filled with busting seems, leaking bosoms, and lots of lust.

This has been up on DA for awhile but held off on posting it here because I again managed to mess up my chapter numbering. This is indeed the next chapter; what was chapter 9 became chapter 10 and I reordered other chapters as I added to and rewrote the previous ones. If you want to go back and read previous chapters I suggest going to my DeviantArt account and finding them there. Once I finish the whole story, hopefully soon, I will post the entire, updated epic here as a compiled volume. Thanks in advance to my readers and commenters, enjoy.
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