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The Overflowing Bra

thesarge
Dr. StrangeHands Part 2
Part 2 of the story. It's the day after. Chad just wants to relax and smoke up, but Sky has other plans. Includes part 1.
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bleh
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Honestly this was easily one of the most entertaining stories I have read on here and the characters are highly entertaining. This story is a lot of fun and I can't wait for the next instalment.

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The narration "style" is just so comical to me. I would enjoy a bit more description but I also think it is fine as is.

MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really like how you're setting up the Character development of the protagonist.

Red
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent! Good story, good writing, but really needs some detailed descriptions. Add that, this is a real winner.

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