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The Overflowing Bra

Fitzbattleaxe
New Beginnings 4
The continuing unofficial follow-up to the Steve Palmer classic "New Beginnings." Please, rate and comment. Feedback is appreciated.
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 Epic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Yus!
 Ryver8
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Terrific writing, detail, and subject matter. Everything about this story is to love!
 tusdine
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I LOVE how the story describes Judy's experiences with her utterly massive udders. I can feel a real weight to them as I read each chapter, and this one even offers a great promise of what is yet to come. I can't wait for more.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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