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The Overflowing Bra

Kraken de Polar
The Weave
The world of magic had been dormant for ages, but prophecy foretold of another source of magic - a new weave. This new source of magic can be quite hard to control, especially for a poor guy who just found out he is the next Arch Magus (tg story with lots of breast growth and a touch of shrinking!).
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

While the premise was promising the story aspect was very dissapointing. It lacked support characters and protagonist development. Also it lacked a lot of background info to explain the nature of the weave and pretty much everything else that happened. I was honestly waiting for Blake to ask what the hell is going on.
Anyway Blake and Drake were decently written and the erotic parts were engaging, therefore 4 points overall enjoyment.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

My transgendered fantasy is to become a young, petite-looking girl who's between 140-150cm (55-59") tall with a pear-shaped figure, and lactating breasts that keep growing bigger every day. Particularly one that is a non-human fantasy race like an elf, fairy, dryad, or kemonomimi (anime-style animal ears and tail), who has sexual relationships with multiple other girls that are all bigger than I am.

So I must thank you for tapping into some aspects of my niche, personal fetish like Ed Miller does with his stories. It would be great if you continue to do further works that have TG/BE/Shrinking.

With that out of the way, I would like to point out that you seem to overestimate the size of G-cup and then K-cup breasts. Breasts with the volume of a person's head would be further down the alphabet.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Defiantly one of the hottest stories I have read on this site in a while. I am kinda take it or leave it on the transgender thing I am definitely all about the shrinking and breast expansion. That has to be my single most favorite combinations. I would say in your next story go even further with that part in particular. I would love to see some wow sized with a woman just a couple of feet tall. But by all means keep up the good work

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Kraken I have always enjoyed how you describe your character's emotional reactions. It brings a more human element to a supernatural setting. I really enjoyed the pull between using his new power and trying to keep his masculinity.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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