The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Perspikay and Coral
Going Native
A new acquisition at the museum has some strange effects on the guests. 
Average Scores:

pobblebonk
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

No problem reading it, very descriptive. I enjoyed the story too, though the point at which the TG happened was left a little ambiguous.

magellin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I personally thought this was a great story and I hope to see more of your work in the future.

As for you guys complaining about notepad, just open the txt file in a browser!

daelon
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

The story itself is good. I will agree with the other reviewer that a notepad file is not the best method for uploading. I know I had to copy and paste it over to word to read it. Also, it was difficult to follow some of the characters in the beginning. I know there were a couple times where I wasn't sure who exactly was doing what.

All that aside, the actual premise and the story were really enjoyable. There are some good bimboization elements and some decent sex scenes. I hope the authors continue writing and work on some of those issues mentioned because there is some definite potential.

cynicalviking
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Rather disappointed overall. The formatting is absolutely horrible, I tried it in Jarte and in Word 2010 with moderate luck. After reformatting it, it was still nearly unreadable due to poor punctuation and spacing. I don't want to spend my time formatting your story so that is my review for now. Keep writing, it does get better if you put the effort in.

Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

only wish it were longer with more descriptions of the transformations

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