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The Overflowing Bra

TrebleClef
TrebleCleffy@gmail.com
Last Night With Lillian
Kate has no idea why her boobs are so much bigger than usual this morning but it may have something to do with what happened with Lil last night... My second story on TOB. GTS growth is pretty minor...
Average Scores:

tsokei
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very good job, some great moments here.

Lexi Kiss
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

this is my favouritest kind of story.. nothing happens too instantly, nothing happens too slowly, and the characters are enjoying their transformations ^_^

cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Really terrific stuff. I enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed your other story.

Cuddlebeam
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Pretty minor GTS is best GTS

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