The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Tieryn
Lucy's Life Changing Shower
Lucy buys a new kind of body wash that has... unexpected results.
Average Scores:

Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Cute, short, and to the point.

maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good story! I was surprised how much I liked it! I especially like the fact that you uploaded many different formats. Thanks! I also like the fact that you start w/ a girl w/ serious boobage. You never see that in a BE story!. Great work keep it up!

Mercat
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Overall OK, short, and not really memorable, but a good story if you want something quick to read.

monkey bear
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent, wonderful imagery, please sequel!

cman
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Pretty fun ideas, but short.

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